Previously published by Gotta Write Network and Novel Advice
copyright 2001 by Richelle Putnam
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distribution contact: richput@mywebemail.net
You Can Write Young Adult Fiction
What is the difference between Young Adult
Fiction and Adult Fiction? Not
much. Subject matters can be just as intense,
reality can be bluntly honest, and characters can be flawed beyond repair. So what is the difference?
Writing style for young adults must be
unambiguous and honest. The protagonist
should be in the age range of your intended audience. Though sex may take place, it must be
important to plot, and not graphic or detailed.
Many authors write for young adults because
they recognize opportunity to influence.
Adults have already formed beliefs and attitudes while young adult
thoughts and beliefs are still being molded.
Because of this, authors must be responsible and make sure to not only
entertain, but also cause the reader to form unbiased ideas and views.
Young adults desire understanding in a
world of rules, regulations, and authority.
Writers grant that gift through words, allowing young protagonists the
power to solve mysteries, save the world from disaster, or change another
person’s life. Divorce, drugs, crime,
prejudice, peer pressure, and concerns for the future affect teenagers and
their friends. Books give hope by giving
characters the ability to deal with unsettling circumstances while helping
others in the process.
If young adults are aliens and lost causes to
you, but you hope your writing will change them, think again. Young adults strive for and believe in
justice, probably even more so than adults.
They are less likely to judge and more likely to forgive. Sometimes their actions appear clumsy and
inadequate simply because they have not had many worldly experiences to learn
from.
An author has to come to terms with a
character, even an antagonist, in order to portray realistic individuals who
have strengths, weaknesses, prejudices, and beliefs. Create in-depth biographies on major
characters and important characteristics on minor ones. If you don’t understand why your characters
are who they are now, your readers won’t be able to either.
Your memory plays an important part. What did it feel like to be left out of a
group? How did it feel to be in love
with someone who didn’t love you back?
What was important to you? Justice? Popularity? Being
accepted? Of course, you can’t
wholeheartedly base characters on your feelings, as you represented only one
teenager. Get involved with youth and
learn from them. Write down their
aspirations. What are their fears? Beliefs? Now, find out why they feel the way they
do. Don’t speak. Just listen.
This is a time for you to learn.
Authors make the error of building a great
plot and then dropping vague, lifeless characters into scenes to carry plot
forward. Big mistake. Readers care about characters and how they
confront conflicts. Yes, plot is
important and must be carefully designed, but without meaningful characters it
loses its drawing factor. An earthquake
in a deserted region may be news, but without characters it doesn’t stir
emotions.
Search for characters as diligently as you do
exciting plots, avoiding stereotypes at all costs. Teenagers recognize and enthusiastically
embrace diversity in our world. They have
recognized that loving parents have troubled teens, and negligent parents
produce well-adjusted teens. They
sympathize with peers that fall into dangerous behavior patterns and will leap
into perilous waters to try to save them.
Writers must use these traits to form believable characters that make
mistakes, have many faults, and are physically flawed. All blondes are not dumb and every student
who wears glasses isn’t a genius. Make
the pretty blonde a genius, and the well-groomed,
quiet student with glasses the rebellious one.
Remember everyone has good and bad.
Reveal both to your readers. Your
characters don’t have to speak in the current teenage jargon, but be careful
that they don’t speak like well-educated adults. Keep language simple and realistic. Now, blend these believable characters into a
well-planned story that has a beginning, middle, and end.
Eliminate passive verbs, and avoid overusing adjectives and
adverbs. Use nouns and intense verbs
that enhance every sense--seeing, hearing, smelling, touching, and tasting—to
form vivid pictures. If you can do this,
you’re on your way to being a successful writer.
The Young-Adult category is not easy to
write, but to this author it is the certainly the most gratifying.
Richelle Putnam is a
former writer for All Headline News. She
has been published in Common Ties, E2K Literary Journal, World Wide Writers,
Orchard Press Mysteries, Southern Hum, The Copperfield Review, Cayuse Press,
Writer’s Journal, Obadiah Press’s Living By Faith Anthology, A tribute to
Mothers Anthology, A Cup of Comfort for Mothers and Daughters, and more. Her children’s literature has been published
on the Institute of Children’s Literature’s website, Writing Korner, and Wee Ones, Boy’s Quest, Appleseeds,
and Hopscotch Magazine for Girls; Her work is
soon to be released in Flashquake, Fireflies in Fruit Jars Anthology, and GCWA
“Mississippi” Anthology. Her novel, Fallout, was released in 2000; She is the
Founder and President of Mississippi Writers Guild. www.richelleputnam.net